Reading Journal

Helping a Suicide When the end Isn’t Near

https://www.nytimes.com/roomfordebate/2015/09/10/helping-a-suicide-when-the-end-isnt-near

  • There are many points to this link. Some point show in favor of assisted suicide to help the end of terminal illness or lifelong depression. That doing so helps the person complete their life the way that they want to and on their terms. The other point of the article is against this. That assisted suicide is illegal in all states for a reason. There is no definitive way to show that a depressed person did in fact want to end their life. That what if they changed their mind the next month or the next minute? Assisted suicide essentially goes against everything doctors and nurses stand for. They stand for the preservation of life, and to keep people on this side of the dirt.
  • I see the points for both sides honestly. It’s hard to try to encourage someone who is tired from battling an illness for so long that they just want to give up. My argument to that is what about the people fighting along with you? That sounds like a selfish statement, but suicide isn’t painful for the person, its painful for the people left. But then I also see the end to all that as a release of stress and fear. Fighting the inevitable for so long for it to finally be done. Not only for the person living every day, but for the people with them living it with them.
  • I like the persuasive styles of the writers to sway the reader to their opinion. They are very matter of fact and I feel you could come out seeing their side no matter if they were trying to sell you the sky was purple.

Peer Review Reflection

I’ve always been anxious about peer review. I hate it to be truthful. We would do it a lot coming up through school. Sometimes the teacher would block out the names so it would be anonymous. I almost think that was worse than having your name on the paper. There you are sitting in English class and the kid in front of you is ripping into your paper saying it sucks while your choking back tears behind him. Maybe that was just my experience. I am also way too shy to be comfortable with peer review. Writing is where I try to be open and real. Having someone else read my writing makes me feel exposed and judged almost. That level of comfort let’s say in a new friendship comes after many awkward encounters for me and after I’ve had a chance to feel the person out.

This time around I did not feel so exposed. Maybe I’m a few years older this time around and people’s thoughts affect me less? Whatever the case may be this review was not as painful as previous experiences. I thoroughly enjoyed my partners story and read it with the lens of just getting to know the person. I feel I got an overall sense of my partners core values, their view on life, and where they want to be as a person. And through their story I believe them and the overall message of their memoir. I do also think I care too much about other people’s feelings and hope that my response did give them some direction to take their piece to the next level. I struggle with not wanting to tear a person down and sometimes I think I just ramble about how the essay made me feel. It’s a work in progress.

For my own essay around I do agree with my partners comments. I should identify Lisa more accurately in my essay. I think it would help to bring my entire essay together. They also pointed out a theme of self-care which I didn’t notice until they pointed it out. They are completely right with seeing that theme and maybe I can weave some of that into my memoir as well.

Peer Review

Initially I thought this memory was going to go a different way. I honestly thought it was going to end up being sad, but I was happily surprised. I am envious of the relationship you have with your grandparents and love that they are your motivation to pursue your business degree. You take respecting your elders to the next level by having your grandpa as your motivation. I would appreciate seeing and feeling more of the emotion that you felt when your grandparents left. It must have been so hard for you to not have them around and I want to feel what you felt. I also could possibly see two messages from your essay. The first one being you need to work hard to achieve your goals. The description you gave of how hard your grandpa worked collecting cans so early in the morning and then wiring the plastic pieces at night. I loved reading that. I could feel how tired they must have been, but they continued to push towards their goal. I also see the message of use people words as your motivation to achieve your goals. As you stated you respected your grandpa so much you used it to fuel your passion. Your love for your family shines through.

Memoir

“Hey, they’re sending me to the ER, it’s not just pneumonia.” Panic, confusion, and the smell of pizza surround me. The literal one time I don’t go to an appointment with Lisa is the one time she is being sent to the ER. I’m mad at myself for going to get these pizzas instead of going to urgent care. But this is the situation we’re in now, and I make it to the hospital in thirty-seven and a half seconds.

I run up to her car and asked what happened at urgent care. All she really could say was they took a chest Xray for the cough that she had for three months. The doctor came back three times with fear in his voice, each time saying he was just confirming what he was seeing on the screen. And finally peeking through the door only enough to tell Lisa she needed to drive herself to the hospital and they were going to keep her.

We walk into the ER entrance. The desk is immediately on our right-hand side, diagonal to the sliding door. The woman with short curly hair tight to her head, looks up from her cheater glasses. Barely giving Lisa the time of day asks for her name. Her eyes widen when she said her name and she told us to have a seat. We turn, there’s three rows of seats. The old shiny wooden seats with blue cloth cushions sat back to back. There’s a vending machine in the room. And on the far wall there’s windows with old eighties style blinds that go straight up and down are pulled across them. A stereotypical small-town old run-down hospital waiting room. Filled with crying babies, and older hard-working men with deep cuts on their fingers.

Our bums didn’t even meet the seat before Lisa’s name was called. We walk through the double door to the ER. Lights, beeping, and a sea of people are in there. It’s so busy people are on stretchers in the hallway. That’s where we end up, a stretcher pushed up against the nurses’ station. Overwhelmed. Typically, I am the one to keep it together for my relationship. But waiting here next to the stretcher in the middle of the ER was a lot.

Immediately a doctor rushes over to Lisa. My heart is in my throat, and it’s hard to concentrate on what she’s saying. I know what she is saying is important but fear was taking over in this minute.

This doctor is average height. I’m around five foot four and she’s maybe my height. Dirty blond hair with a white coat. She has those hiking shoes on, the brown ones with the holes in them that Velcro.  Striped socks were under the shoes. She’s an infectious disease doctor. She finally says something that sticks. Lisa has lesions or tumors all over her lungs, at least one hundred of them. Just as quickly as we were brought into the ER hallway, we were immediately moved into isolation and Lisa is not leaving the hospital.

“Are you an intravenous drug user?” “Have you been around any birds or lizards?”  “Have you traveled to Arizona and gone golfing recently?” No. No to all of that. A cough, that’s what brought Lisa into urgent care with the thought of pneumonia. Not lesions. Not tumors. Not fungus that could possibly be growing in her lungs.

After a week. Too many tubes of blood. Cat scans, X-rays, and doctors. Infectious disease doctors, cardiologists, pulmonologists, rheumatologists, and oncologists. Each one dumbfounded. Lisa is a perfectly healthy person from the outside. But inside her lungs have these things on them or through them, the doctors are not sure at this point. Test after test came back within normal ranges. The only thing off is her inflammation count, it’s high. Our last hope is a test called an ANCA test. It’s a test that could possibly point towards vasculitis in Lisa’s lungs. Essentially her lungs make antibodies that attack themselves and create these holes in her lungs.

Muddy water is what she’s called. Doctor after doctor is not convinced of much of anything. But they’re especially not convinced that she has a form of vasculitis in her lungs. What is there to do in these situations? You stay up all night over thinking, worrying, wondering. The worry starts to turn to anger and I feel the next doctor to turn us away without taking an actual look at her file I’m going to blow up on. That’s not me. I’m quiet, reserved. You don’t know how I’m feeling unless I tell you, and even then, I won’t tell you the entire way I’m feeling. I’m respectful to those who have gone to school for medicine, and patient enough to sit and wait for a very long time. But not for this, how can you find patience when there are no answers?

Fast forward a bit. We finally find a doctor in Boston who reads more than the top line of Lisa’s file. And we come up with a plan. We do a biopsy of her lung and that is finally going to give us an answer definitively. Cancer or vasculitis.

Vasculitis, GPA Vasculitis technically. The new name for Wegener’s Disease. In a nutshell her lung tissue attacks itself and causes holes in her lungs. She’s been breathing with a half of a lungs capacity. To add a little frustration to the happiness they don’t know why this happens. That’s okay though, we have an answer. More importantly we have a plan for treatment.

Treatment is infusion therapy, a drug used for leukemia patients that wipes out her immune system to get rid of the bad antibodies in her lungs. Every six months for the next two years with the end game being remission.

We’re a year into these treatments. The side effects were awful. From the high dose of the prednisone needed to start the treatments Lisa was a different person. High doses like that make people irritable and mean. I truly could not say the right thing for eight months. It was like literally living on egg shells constantly. It’s hard, it can start to drive a wedge in between you and the person. But it’s up to you to remember its not them it’s the medication speaking.

Her throat closed the first round of her infusion. We were warned of this. It’s so much medication all at once in your body. Your body freaks out and tries to fight it off. Lisa’s throat started to close. Fear took over her eyes, and I felt helpless. They caught it early which was lucky.

More than just the physical side effects that affect the person and the relationship, the stress eats you alive. As much as you try to be there for the other person there are days where you break. There are days when you are pushed away. And there is a time when you are given and out of your relationship because this will be a lifelong struggle. Life must adjust. You can’t just have anyone over during these treatments. You must be more selective of when you chose to go out to have some sense of normalcy. It’s almost like you feel the need to shut out the world and shelter in place to protect the one you’re with. I admit that I am overprotective majority of the time. This global pandemic didn’t help that. But at the end of the day. Going through this process, the unknown, fear, stress, and treatment. This whole thing has reminded me to appreciate your life and your partner. As cliché as it sounds life is short. A trip to urgent care can send your world into a different kind of spin and it will make or break you. Family time holds more weight to me. Responding to that email can wait until I’m back at work. And I try to watch my words more carefully. My person was very close to being taken from me, and I remind myself of that daily.

Sample Memoir




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In the short story above we follow Holly. Holly starts out with just having flu like symptoms, but it progressively gets worse, and she does not feel better. After finally going to the hospital and getting an Xray it looks like there are tumors all over her lungs. Her inflammation levels were elevated, and they performed a biopsy on her nose to confirm their suspicions. She was later confirmed to have Wegener’s Granulomatosis. Your cells in your lungs, nose and throat literally destroy themselves. Treatment is not easy. It starts with high levels of steroids and infusion treatments that wipe out the immune system. The end game is remission with the hopes that the inflammation levels eventually become normal.
Although short, the writer made me feel like I was with her. Simple details of being home feeling like garbage. Not wanting to eat, and avoiding going to the doctors. It’s all something that we’ve gone through. The fear of waiting for results while your body is failing around you. And the struggle to see the light at the end of the road. Especially when all the treatment just seems to not be working. That your body isn’t healing how it should. She goes back and forth between these small details which brings me to her hospital room. And the feelings she has during this entire process.
I chose this because it is a story I have lived through. Not myself, but through my fiancé. The initial illness of the flu, the worst flu and cough I have ever witnessed. Getting the phone call that they are headed to the emergency room. The Xray with all those tumors, or holes as I now know them. The year long process just to get a diagnosis ending with a biopsy and now treatment. This is real. This is scary. And this will test your relationship, you as a partner, and your faith in something that it will be okay. I choose real life drama, real feelings, and real emotions. Stories of triumph and hope.

Assignment 1

Exercise 1

My hometown was a secluded place to grow up. It’s filled with the excitement of a single traffic light. Built around a reservoir that most would never swim in unless you lived in the grove. And just recently the only grocery store finally shut down in the strip mall where nothing survived.

Laci had a rather eccentric style. Not the kind you would see hanging out in front of hot topic. But the kind where her scent was more earthy rather than fruity. Her jeans had holes but not ones that were put there on purpose. And her t shirt was always just a little too long on her. Like she was trying to keep the world away from her.

Mr. Brown is the worst teacher I’ve ever had. He has no passion, no drive, and puts forth no effort. Any attempt I make to get extra help he sends me away leaving me feeling defeated and worthless. It’s not my fault I don’t understand chemistry. It’s more than clear that teaching is his passion and searching the web for breaking news is.

The room seemed very institutional. Cold. Yes, the building is brand new, but this room is uninviting. There is nothing on the walls. Nothing draws you in. There is nothing that makes you want to enter and sit for a while. It’s not homie, and the people here don’t help. It’s the feeling it’s supposed to give you. It’s missing.

The room was small. Windows at the far end of the room from ceiling to floor. A pillar in the center of the room that blocked the view of the people sitting on the right-hand side. Chairs lined the perimeter of the slanted rectangle. A few awkward back to back chairs were placed in the middle. The focus of the entire room was an old flat screen tv that was hip in the early 2000’s. I chose my seat in the right-hand corner. Where the glass windows met the wall. It had everything. A chair with a side table, a lamp, and an outlet close by. Everything was quiet as I checked the tv for an update. My fingernails chewed from weeks of waiting. My stomach in knots more than usual. Looking disheveled this day rather than normal. A loud voice comes barreling through the door. Surprised as I am to see her, her only concern was smoking a cigarette. I’m annoyed. With so much going on how is that your concern? Just as quickly as she came in, she left. And I go back into my own thoughts. My stomach sinks more as my phone rings. She’s waking up finally, and it was successful. I can go upstairs finally to see her now.  

Theme

My proposed theme is health and medicine. Since I was a teenager, I’ve worked in a healthcare setting in an assisted living facility. I finally came back to school to finish my nursing degree. More importantly health and medicine has always been an interest in me. I love learning about the body and medicine.

Autobiography

I’m Megan, Meg to some, Meggie to less. I’ve lived in Norton my entire life with my mom and three older sisters. I would visit North Attleboro on the weekends to see my dad. My childhood, at least to me, was normal. Filled with friends, riding bikes, and swimming in the reservoir. No dramatic events, no newsworthy stories.

               I tried the whole moving away to college thing and hated it. After coming home from school, I enlisted in the Army National Guard, and loved the army. Although I wanted to go active duty after finishing my training life didn’t take me down that path. I found myself working full time for the guard at a maintenance shop here in Massachusetts. Over time I found myself hating my work more and more. I took a leap of faith and left my very secure job with the guard and went back to the assisted living company I worked for since I was fifteen. I now work with dementia seniors again, and love going to work again.

               My fiancé and I bought a house here in Norton. We’ve made it a home with a dog, Maya, and two cats. Everyday life is busy with family, friends, and work. This chaotic, messy life is a happy one, and I couldn’t ask for more.

               During all these life events I kept saying I’ll go back to school, use my benefits and finish my nursing degree. Maybe in a moment of spontaneity I finally did it. I applied to BCC and just told myself to finish. Here I am finishing the degree I started.

               Writing I do find challenging. Most of my writing since finishing high school has been writing letters of recommendation, or emails for my fiancé and friends. But that’s been the extent. Writing is daunting. I know the exact way I want to come across in my writing style. I usually end up erasing everything I write because it’s not coming out how it sounds in my head. After trying a few more times I end up with something I consider good enough, and good enough to be graded.

               This time through school I’m hoping to develop my writing into what I do hear in my head. It’s almost like my thoughts overwhelm my hands as they type. Or I can’t seem to focus clearly on how I want my writing to come across and my writing feels incomplete. I know I’ll get there, eventually.